[PATCH] documentation/arm64 : kdump fixed typo errors

hariconscious@gmail.com posted 1 patch 1 month, 2 weeks ago
Documentation/arch/arm64/kdump.rst | 4 ++--
1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-)
[PATCH] documentation/arm64 : kdump fixed typo errors
Posted by hariconscious@gmail.com 1 month, 2 weeks ago
From: HariKrishna <hariconscious@gmail.com>

kdump.rst documentation typos corrected

Signed-off-by: HariKrishna <hariconscious@gmail.com>
---
 Documentation/arch/arm64/kdump.rst | 4 ++--
 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-)

diff --git a/Documentation/arch/arm64/kdump.rst b/Documentation/arch/arm64/kdump.rst
index 56a89f45df28..d3195a93a066 100644
--- a/Documentation/arch/arm64/kdump.rst
+++ b/Documentation/arch/arm64/kdump.rst
@@ -5,7 +5,7 @@ crashkernel memory reservation on arm64
 Author: Baoquan He <bhe@redhat.com>
 
 Kdump mechanism is used to capture a corrupted kernel vmcore so that
-it can be subsequently analyzed. In order to do this, a preliminarily
+it can be subsequently analyzed. In order to do this, a preliminary
 reserved memory is needed to pre-load the kdump kernel and boot such
 kernel if corruption happens.
 
@@ -18,7 +18,7 @@ Kernel parameter
 
 Through the kernel parameters below, memory can be reserved accordingly
 during the early stage of the first kernel booting so that a continuous
-large chunk of memomy can be found. The low memory reservation needs to
+large chunk of memory can be found. The low memory reservation needs to
 be considered if the crashkernel is reserved from the high memory area.
 
 - crashkernel=size@offset
-- 
2.43.0
Re: [PATCH] documentation/arm64 : kdump fixed typo errors
Posted by Jonathan Corbet 1 month, 2 weeks ago
hariconscious@gmail.com writes:

> From: HariKrishna <hariconscious@gmail.com>
>
> kdump.rst documentation typos corrected
>
> Signed-off-by: HariKrishna <hariconscious@gmail.com>
> ---
>  Documentation/arch/arm64/kdump.rst | 4 ++--
>  1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-)
>
> diff --git a/Documentation/arch/arm64/kdump.rst b/Documentation/arch/arm64/kdump.rst
> index 56a89f45df28..d3195a93a066 100644
> --- a/Documentation/arch/arm64/kdump.rst
> +++ b/Documentation/arch/arm64/kdump.rst
> @@ -5,7 +5,7 @@ crashkernel memory reservation on arm64
>  Author: Baoquan He <bhe@redhat.com>
>  
>  Kdump mechanism is used to capture a corrupted kernel vmcore so that
> -it can be subsequently analyzed. In order to do this, a preliminarily
> +it can be subsequently analyzed. In order to do this, a preliminary
>  reserved memory is needed to pre-load the kdump kernel and boot such
>  kernel if corruption happens.

I don't think this is right.  While reserving judgment on
"preliminarily" as a word, the intended use is adverbial, so this change
does not make things better.  The better fix, perhaps, is to say
"previously" instead.

Should you choose to resubmit this, we'll need your real name in the
Signed-off-by tag, please.

Thanks,

jon