[PATCH] docs: ftrace: fix ambiguous sentence

Huichun Feng posted 1 patch 4 years, 5 months ago
Documentation/trace/ftrace.rst | 2 +-
1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-)
[PATCH] docs: ftrace: fix ambiguous sentence
Posted by Huichun Feng 4 years, 5 months ago
The sentence looks ambiguous, rephrase it by adding ", there".

Signed-off-by: Huichun Feng <foxhoundsk.tw@gmail.com>
Signed-off-by: Ching-Chun (Jim) Huang <jserv@ccns.ncku.edu.tw>
Signed-off-by: Chun-Hung Tseng <henrybear327@gmail.com>
---
 Documentation/trace/ftrace.rst | 2 +-
 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-)

diff --git a/Documentation/trace/ftrace.rst b/Documentation/trace/ftrace.rst
index b3166c4a7..45b8c56af 100644
--- a/Documentation/trace/ftrace.rst
+++ b/Documentation/trace/ftrace.rst
@@ -3370,7 +3370,7 @@ one of the latency tracers, you will get the following results.
 
 Instances
 ---------
-In the tracefs tracing directory is a directory called "instances".
+In the tracefs tracing directory, there is a directory called "instances".
 This directory can have new directories created inside of it using
 mkdir, and removing directories with rmdir. The directory created
 with mkdir in this directory will already contain files and other
-- 
2.34.1

Re: [PATCH] docs: ftrace: fix ambiguous sentence
Posted by Steven Rostedt 4 years, 5 months ago
On Tue, 11 Jan 2022 13:20:01 +0800
Huichun Feng <foxhoundsk.tw@gmail.com> wrote:

> The sentence looks ambiguous, rephrase it by adding ", there".
> 

Fine with me.

Acked-by: Steven Rostedt <rostedt@goodmis.org>

-- Steve

> Signed-off-by: Huichun Feng <foxhoundsk.tw@gmail.com>
> Signed-off-by: Ching-Chun (Jim) Huang <jserv@ccns.ncku.edu.tw>
> Signed-off-by: Chun-Hung Tseng <henrybear327@gmail.com>
> ---
>  Documentation/trace/ftrace.rst | 2 +-
>  1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-)
> 
> diff --git a/Documentation/trace/ftrace.rst b/Documentation/trace/ftrace.rst
> index b3166c4a7..45b8c56af 100644
> --- a/Documentation/trace/ftrace.rst
> +++ b/Documentation/trace/ftrace.rst
> @@ -3370,7 +3370,7 @@ one of the latency tracers, you will get the following results.
>  
>  Instances
>  ---------
> -In the tracefs tracing directory is a directory called "instances".
> +In the tracefs tracing directory, there is a directory called "instances".
>  This directory can have new directories created inside of it using
>  mkdir, and removing directories with rmdir. The directory created
>  with mkdir in this directory will already contain files and other

Re: [PATCH] docs: ftrace: fix ambiguous sentence
Posted by Jonathan Corbet 4 years, 5 months ago
Huichun Feng <foxhoundsk.tw@gmail.com> writes:

> The sentence looks ambiguous, rephrase it by adding ", there".
>
> Signed-off-by: Huichun Feng <foxhoundsk.tw@gmail.com>
> Signed-off-by: Ching-Chun (Jim) Huang <jserv@ccns.ncku.edu.tw>
> Signed-off-by: Chun-Hung Tseng <henrybear327@gmail.com>
> ---
>  Documentation/trace/ftrace.rst | 2 +-
>  1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-)
>
> diff --git a/Documentation/trace/ftrace.rst b/Documentation/trace/ftrace.rst
> index b3166c4a7..45b8c56af 100644
> --- a/Documentation/trace/ftrace.rst
> +++ b/Documentation/trace/ftrace.rst
> @@ -3370,7 +3370,7 @@ one of the latency tracers, you will get the following results.
>  
>  Instances
>  ---------
> -In the tracefs tracing directory is a directory called "instances".
> +In the tracefs tracing directory, there is a directory called "instances".
>  This directory can have new directories created inside of it using

Applied, thanks.

jon