[PATCH v2] docs: update xenstore-migration.md

Juergen Gross posted 1 patch 3 years, 11 months ago
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docs/designs/xenstore-migration.md | 71 +++++++++++++++++-------------
1 file changed, 40 insertions(+), 31 deletions(-)
[PATCH v2] docs: update xenstore-migration.md
Posted by Juergen Gross 3 years, 11 months ago
Update connection record details: make flags common for sockets and
domains, and add pending incoming data.

Signed-off-by: Juergen Gross <jgross@suse.com>
---
V2:
- added out-resp-len to connection record
---
 docs/designs/xenstore-migration.md | 71 +++++++++++++++++-------------
 1 file changed, 40 insertions(+), 31 deletions(-)

diff --git a/docs/designs/xenstore-migration.md b/docs/designs/xenstore-migration.md
index 34a2afd17e..5736bbad94 100644
--- a/docs/designs/xenstore-migration.md
+++ b/docs/designs/xenstore-migration.md
@@ -147,43 +147,59 @@ the domain being migrated.
 ```
     0       1       2       3       4       5       6       7    octet
 +-------+-------+-------+-------+-------+-------+-------+-------+
-| conn-id                       | conn-type     | conn-spec
+| conn-id                       | conn-type     | flags         |
++-------------------------------+---------------+---------------+
+| conn-spec
 ...
-+-------------------------------+-------------------------------+
-| data-len                      | data
-+-------------------------------+
++---------------+---------------+-------------------------------+
+| in-data-len   | out-resp-len  | out-data-len                  |
++---------------+---------------+-------------------------------+
+| data
 ...
 ```
 
 
-| Field       | Description                                     |
-|-------------|-------------------------------------------------|
-| `conn-id`   | A non-zero number used to identify this         |
-|             | connection in subsequent connection-specific    |
-|             | records                                         |
-|             |                                                 |
-| `conn-type` | 0x0000: shared ring                             |
-|             | 0x0001: socket                                  |
-|             | 0x0002 - 0xFFFF: reserved for future use        |
-|             |                                                 |
-| `conn-spec` | See below                                       |
-|             |                                                 |
-| `data-len`  | The length (in octets) of any pending data not  |
-|             | yet written to the connection                   |
-|             |                                                 |
-| `data`      | Pending data (may be empty)                     |
+| Field          | Description                                  |
+|----------------|----------------------------------------------|
+| `conn-id`      | A non-zero number used to identify this      |
+|                | connection in subsequent connection-specific |
+|                | records                                      |
+|                |                                              |
+| `flags`        | A bit-wise OR of:                            |
+|                | 0001: read-only                              |
+|                |                                              |
+| `conn-type`    | 0x0000: shared ring                          |
+|                | 0x0001: socket                               |
+|                | 0x0002 - 0xFFFF: reserved for future use     |
+|                |                                              |
+| `conn-spec`    | See below                                    |
+|                |                                              |
+| `in-data-len`  | The length (in octets) of any data read      |
+|                | from the connection not yet processed        |
+|                |                                              |
+| `out-resp-len` | The length (in octets) of a partial response |
+|                | not yet written to the connection (included  |
+|                | in the following `out-data-len`)             |
+|                |                                              |
+| `out-data-len` | The length (in octets) of any pending data   |
+|                | not yet written to the connection            |
+|                |                                              |
+| `data`         | Pending data, first read data, then written  |
+|                | data (any of both may be empty)              |
 
-The format of `conn-spec` is dependent upon `conn-type`.
+In case of live update the connection record for the connection via which
+the live update command was issued will contain the response for the live
+update command in the pending write data.
 
 \pagebreak
 
+The format of `conn-spec` is dependent upon `conn-type`.
+
 For `shared ring` connections it is as follows:
 
 
 ```
     0       1       2       3       4       5       6       7    octet
-                                                +-------+-------+
-                                                | flags         |
 +---------------+---------------+---------------+---------------+
 | domid         | tdomid        | evtchn                        |
 +-------------------------------+-------------------------------+
@@ -198,8 +214,6 @@ For `shared ring` connections it is as follows:
 |           | it has been subject to an SET_TARGET              |
 |           | operation [2] or DOMID_INVALID [3] otherwise      |
 |           |                                                   |
-| `flags`   | Must be zero                                      |
-|           |                                                   |
 | `evtchn`  | The port number of the interdomain channel used   |
 |           | by `domid` to communicate with xenstored          |
 |           |                                                   |
@@ -211,8 +225,6 @@ For `socket` connections it is as follows:
 
 
 ```
-                                                +-------+-------+
-                                                | flags         |
 +---------------+---------------+---------------+---------------+
 | socket-fd                     | pad                           |
 +-------------------------------+-------------------------------+
@@ -221,9 +233,6 @@ For `socket` connections it is as follows:
 
 | Field       | Description                                     |
 |-------------|-------------------------------------------------|
-| `flags`     | A bit-wise OR of:                               |
-|             | 0001: read-only                                 |
-|             |                                                 |
 | `socket-fd` | The file descriptor of the connected socket     |
 
 This type of connection is only relevant for live update, where the xenstored
@@ -398,4 +407,4 @@ explanation of node permissions.
 
 [3] See https://xenbits.xen.org/gitweb/?p=xen.git;a=blob;f=xen/include/public/xen.h;hb=HEAD#l612
 
-[4] https://wiki.xen.org/wiki/XenBus
\ No newline at end of file
+[4] https://wiki.xen.org/wiki/XenBus
-- 
2.26.2


Re: [PATCH v2] docs: update xenstore-migration.md
Posted by Julien Grall 3 years, 11 months ago
Hi Juergen,

On 28/05/2020 09:22, Juergen Gross wrote:
> -| Field       | Description                                     |
> -|-------------|-------------------------------------------------|
> -| `conn-id`   | A non-zero number used to identify this         |
> -|             | connection in subsequent connection-specific    |
> -|             | records                                         |
> -|             |                                                 |
> -| `conn-type` | 0x0000: shared ring                             |
> -|             | 0x0001: socket                                  |
> -|             | 0x0002 - 0xFFFF: reserved for future use        |
> -|             |                                                 |
> -| `conn-spec` | See below                                       |
> -|             |                                                 |
> -| `data-len`  | The length (in octets) of any pending data not  |
> -|             | yet written to the connection                   |
> -|             |                                                 |
> -| `data`      | Pending data (may be empty)                     |
> +| Field          | Description                                  |
> +|----------------|----------------------------------------------|
> +| `conn-id`      | A non-zero number used to identify this      |
> +|                | connection in subsequent connection-specific |
> +|                | records                                      |
> +|                |                                              |
> +| `flags`        | A bit-wise OR of:                            |
> +|                | 0001: read-only                              |

NIT: It is a bit odd the flags is in the header after `conn-type` and 
described before.

> +|                |                                              |
> +| `conn-type`    | 0x0000: shared ring                          |
> +|                | 0x0001: socket                               |
> +|                | 0x0002 - 0xFFFF: reserved for future use     |
> +|                |                                              |
> +| `conn-spec`    | See below                                    |
> +|                |                                              |
> +| `in-data-len`  | The length (in octets) of any data read      |
> +|                | from the connection not yet processed        |
> +|                |                                              |
> +| `out-resp-len` | The length (in octets) of a partial response |
> +|                | not yet written to the connection (included  |
> +|                | in the following `out-data-len`)             |

This seems to come from nowhere. It would be good to explain in the 
commit message why this is necessary.

> +|                |                                              |
> +| `out-data-len` | The length (in octets) of any pending data   |
> +|                | not yet written to the connection            |

Cheers,

-- 
Julien Grall

Re: [PATCH v2] docs: update xenstore-migration.md
Posted by Jürgen Groß 3 years, 11 months ago
On 28.05.20 10:34, Julien Grall wrote:
> Hi Juergen,
> 
> On 28/05/2020 09:22, Juergen Gross wrote:
>> -| Field       | Description                                     |
>> -|-------------|-------------------------------------------------|
>> -| `conn-id`   | A non-zero number used to identify this         |
>> -|             | connection in subsequent connection-specific    |
>> -|             | records                                         |
>> -|             |                                                 |
>> -| `conn-type` | 0x0000: shared ring                             |
>> -|             | 0x0001: socket                                  |
>> -|             | 0x0002 - 0xFFFF: reserved for future use        |
>> -|             |                                                 |
>> -| `conn-spec` | See below                                       |
>> -|             |                                                 |
>> -| `data-len`  | The length (in octets) of any pending data not  |
>> -|             | yet written to the connection                   |
>> -|             |                                                 |
>> -| `data`      | Pending data (may be empty)                     |
>> +| Field          | Description                                  |
>> +|----------------|----------------------------------------------|
>> +| `conn-id`      | A non-zero number used to identify this      |
>> +|                | connection in subsequent connection-specific |
>> +|                | records                                      |
>> +|                |                                              |
>> +| `flags`        | A bit-wise OR of:                            |
>> +|                | 0001: read-only                              |
> 
> NIT: It is a bit odd the flags is in the header after `conn-type` and 
> described before.

Okay, I'll swap the descriptions.

> 
>> +|                |                                              |
>> +| `conn-type`    | 0x0000: shared ring                          |
>> +|                | 0x0001: socket                               |
>> +|                | 0x0002 - 0xFFFF: reserved for future use     |
>> +|                |                                              |
>> +| `conn-spec`    | See below                                    |
>> +|                |                                              |
>> +| `in-data-len`  | The length (in octets) of any data read      |
>> +|                | from the connection not yet processed        |
>> +|                |                                              |
>> +| `out-resp-len` | The length (in octets) of a partial response |
>> +|                | not yet written to the connection (included  |
>> +|                | in the following `out-data-len`)             |
> 
> This seems to come from nowhere. It would be good to explain in the 
> commit message why this is necessary.

Okay.


Juergen

RE: [PATCH v2] docs: update xenstore-migration.md
Posted by Paul Durrant 3 years, 11 months ago
> -----Original Message-----
> From: Xen-devel <xen-devel-bounces@lists.xenproject.org> On Behalf Of Juergen Gross
> Sent: 28 May 2020 09:22
> To: xen-devel@lists.xenproject.org
> Cc: Juergen Gross <jgross@suse.com>; Stefano Stabellini <sstabellini@kernel.org>; Julien Grall
> <julien@xen.org>; Wei Liu <wl@xen.org>; Andrew Cooper <andrew.cooper3@citrix.com>; Ian Jackson
> <ian.jackson@eu.citrix.com>; George Dunlap <george.dunlap@citrix.com>; Jan Beulich <jbeulich@suse.com>
> Subject: [PATCH v2] docs: update xenstore-migration.md
> 
> Update connection record details: make flags common for sockets and
> domains, and add pending incoming data.
> 
> Signed-off-by: Juergen Gross <jgross@suse.com>
> ---
> V2:
> - added out-resp-len to connection record
> ---
>  docs/designs/xenstore-migration.md | 71 +++++++++++++++++-------------
>  1 file changed, 40 insertions(+), 31 deletions(-)
> 
> diff --git a/docs/designs/xenstore-migration.md b/docs/designs/xenstore-migration.md
> index 34a2afd17e..5736bbad94 100644
> --- a/docs/designs/xenstore-migration.md
> +++ b/docs/designs/xenstore-migration.md
> @@ -147,43 +147,59 @@ the domain being migrated.
>  ```
>      0       1       2       3       4       5       6       7    octet
>  +-------+-------+-------+-------+-------+-------+-------+-------+
> -| conn-id                       | conn-type     | conn-spec
> +| conn-id                       | conn-type     | flags         |
> ++-------------------------------+---------------+---------------+
> +| conn-spec
>  ...
> -+-------------------------------+-------------------------------+
> -| data-len                      | data
> -+-------------------------------+
> ++---------------+---------------+-------------------------------+
> +| in-data-len   | out-resp-len  | out-data-len                  |
> ++---------------+---------------+-------------------------------+
> +| data
>  ...
>  ```
> 
> 
> -| Field       | Description                                     |
> -|-------------|-------------------------------------------------|
> -| `conn-id`   | A non-zero number used to identify this         |
> -|             | connection in subsequent connection-specific    |
> -|             | records                                         |
> -|             |                                                 |
> -| `conn-type` | 0x0000: shared ring                             |
> -|             | 0x0001: socket                                  |
> -|             | 0x0002 - 0xFFFF: reserved for future use        |
> -|             |                                                 |
> -| `conn-spec` | See below                                       |
> -|             |                                                 |
> -| `data-len`  | The length (in octets) of any pending data not  |
> -|             | yet written to the connection                   |
> -|             |                                                 |
> -| `data`      | Pending data (may be empty)                     |
> +| Field          | Description                                  |
> +|----------------|----------------------------------------------|
> +| `conn-id`      | A non-zero number used to identify this      |
> +|                | connection in subsequent connection-specific |
> +|                | records                                      |
> +|                |                                              |
> +| `flags`        | A bit-wise OR of:                            |
> +|                | 0001: read-only                              |
> +|                |                                              |
> +| `conn-type`    | 0x0000: shared ring                          |
> +|                | 0x0001: socket                               |
> +|                | 0x0002 - 0xFFFF: reserved for future use     |
> +|                |                                              |

Agreed with Julien... the above two would be better swapped to match the order of the fields in the record.

> +| `conn-spec`    | See below                                    |
> +|                |                                              |
> +| `in-data-len`  | The length (in octets) of any data read      |
> +|                | from the connection not yet processed        |
> +|                |                                              |
> +| `out-resp-len` | The length (in octets) of a partial response |
> +|                | not yet written to the connection (included  |
> +|                | in the following `out-data-len`)             |
> +|                |                                              |
> +| `out-data-len` | The length (in octets) of any pending data   |
> +|                | not yet written to the connection            |

So, IIUC out-data-len is inclusive of out-resp-len?

> +|                |                                              |
> +| `data`         | Pending data, first read data, then written  |
> +|                | data (any of both may be empty)              |

Perhaps be more explicit here:

"Pending data: first in-data-len octets of read data, then out-data-len octets of written data"

> 
> -The format of `conn-spec` is dependent upon `conn-type`.
> +In case of live update the connection record for the connection via which
> +the live update command was issued will contain the response for the live
> +update command in the pending write data.

s/write/written for consistency I think.

  Paul

> 
>  \pagebreak
> 
> +The format of `conn-spec` is dependent upon `conn-type`.
> +
>  For `shared ring` connections it is as follows:
> 
> 
>  ```
>      0       1       2       3       4       5       6       7    octet
> -                                                +-------+-------+
> -                                                | flags         |
>  +---------------+---------------+---------------+---------------+
>  | domid         | tdomid        | evtchn                        |
>  +-------------------------------+-------------------------------+
> @@ -198,8 +214,6 @@ For `shared ring` connections it is as follows:
>  |           | it has been subject to an SET_TARGET              |
>  |           | operation [2] or DOMID_INVALID [3] otherwise      |
>  |           |                                                   |
> -| `flags`   | Must be zero                                      |
> -|           |                                                   |
>  | `evtchn`  | The port number of the interdomain channel used   |
>  |           | by `domid` to communicate with xenstored          |
>  |           |                                                   |
> @@ -211,8 +225,6 @@ For `socket` connections it is as follows:
> 
> 
>  ```
> -                                                +-------+-------+
> -                                                | flags         |
>  +---------------+---------------+---------------+---------------+
>  | socket-fd                     | pad                           |
>  +-------------------------------+-------------------------------+
> @@ -221,9 +233,6 @@ For `socket` connections it is as follows:
> 
>  | Field       | Description                                     |
>  |-------------|-------------------------------------------------|
> -| `flags`     | A bit-wise OR of:                               |
> -|             | 0001: read-only                                 |
> -|             |                                                 |
>  | `socket-fd` | The file descriptor of the connected socket     |
> 
>  This type of connection is only relevant for live update, where the xenstored
> @@ -398,4 +407,4 @@ explanation of node permissions.
> 
>  [3] See https://xenbits.xen.org/gitweb/?p=xen.git;a=blob;f=xen/include/public/xen.h;hb=HEAD#l612
> 
> -[4] https://wiki.xen.org/wiki/XenBus
> \ No newline at end of file
> +[4] https://wiki.xen.org/wiki/XenBus
> --
> 2.26.2
> 



Re: [PATCH v2] docs: update xenstore-migration.md
Posted by Jürgen Groß 3 years, 11 months ago
On 28.05.20 10:53, Paul Durrant wrote:
>> -----Original Message-----
>> From: Xen-devel <xen-devel-bounces@lists.xenproject.org> On Behalf Of Juergen Gross
>> Sent: 28 May 2020 09:22
>> To: xen-devel@lists.xenproject.org
>> Cc: Juergen Gross <jgross@suse.com>; Stefano Stabellini <sstabellini@kernel.org>; Julien Grall
>> <julien@xen.org>; Wei Liu <wl@xen.org>; Andrew Cooper <andrew.cooper3@citrix.com>; Ian Jackson
>> <ian.jackson@eu.citrix.com>; George Dunlap <george.dunlap@citrix.com>; Jan Beulich <jbeulich@suse.com>
>> Subject: [PATCH v2] docs: update xenstore-migration.md
>>
>> Update connection record details: make flags common for sockets and
>> domains, and add pending incoming data.
>>
>> Signed-off-by: Juergen Gross <jgross@suse.com>
>> ---
>> V2:
>> - added out-resp-len to connection record
>> ---
>>   docs/designs/xenstore-migration.md | 71 +++++++++++++++++-------------
>>   1 file changed, 40 insertions(+), 31 deletions(-)
>>
>> diff --git a/docs/designs/xenstore-migration.md b/docs/designs/xenstore-migration.md
>> index 34a2afd17e..5736bbad94 100644
>> --- a/docs/designs/xenstore-migration.md
>> +++ b/docs/designs/xenstore-migration.md
>> @@ -147,43 +147,59 @@ the domain being migrated.
>>   ```
>>       0       1       2       3       4       5       6       7    octet
>>   +-------+-------+-------+-------+-------+-------+-------+-------+
>> -| conn-id                       | conn-type     | conn-spec
>> +| conn-id                       | conn-type     | flags         |
>> ++-------------------------------+---------------+---------------+
>> +| conn-spec
>>   ...
>> -+-------------------------------+-------------------------------+
>> -| data-len                      | data
>> -+-------------------------------+
>> ++---------------+---------------+-------------------------------+
>> +| in-data-len   | out-resp-len  | out-data-len                  |
>> ++---------------+---------------+-------------------------------+
>> +| data
>>   ...
>>   ```
>>
>>
>> -| Field       | Description                                     |
>> -|-------------|-------------------------------------------------|
>> -| `conn-id`   | A non-zero number used to identify this         |
>> -|             | connection in subsequent connection-specific    |
>> -|             | records                                         |
>> -|             |                                                 |
>> -| `conn-type` | 0x0000: shared ring                             |
>> -|             | 0x0001: socket                                  |
>> -|             | 0x0002 - 0xFFFF: reserved for future use        |
>> -|             |                                                 |
>> -| `conn-spec` | See below                                       |
>> -|             |                                                 |
>> -| `data-len`  | The length (in octets) of any pending data not  |
>> -|             | yet written to the connection                   |
>> -|             |                                                 |
>> -| `data`      | Pending data (may be empty)                     |
>> +| Field          | Description                                  |
>> +|----------------|----------------------------------------------|
>> +| `conn-id`      | A non-zero number used to identify this      |
>> +|                | connection in subsequent connection-specific |
>> +|                | records                                      |
>> +|                |                                              |
>> +| `flags`        | A bit-wise OR of:                            |
>> +|                | 0001: read-only                              |
>> +|                |                                              |
>> +| `conn-type`    | 0x0000: shared ring                          |
>> +|                | 0x0001: socket                               |
>> +|                | 0x0002 - 0xFFFF: reserved for future use     |
>> +|                |                                              |
> 
> Agreed with Julien... the above two would be better swapped to match the order of the fields in the record.

Yes.

> 
>> +| `conn-spec`    | See below                                    |
>> +|                |                                              |
>> +| `in-data-len`  | The length (in octets) of any data read      |
>> +|                | from the connection not yet processed        |
>> +|                |                                              |
>> +| `out-resp-len` | The length (in octets) of a partial response |
>> +|                | not yet written to the connection (included  |
>> +|                | in the following `out-data-len`)             |
>> +|                |                                              |
>> +| `out-data-len` | The length (in octets) of any pending data   |
>> +|                | not yet written to the connection            |
> 
> So, IIUC out-data-len is inclusive of out-resp-len?

Yes.

> 
>> +|                |                                              |
>> +| `data`         | Pending data, first read data, then written  |
>> +|                | data (any of both may be empty)              |
> 
> Perhaps be more explicit here:
> 
> "Pending data: first in-data-len octets of read data, then out-data-len octets of written data"

Okay.

> 
>>
>> -The format of `conn-spec` is dependent upon `conn-type`.
>> +In case of live update the connection record for the connection via which
>> +the live update command was issued will contain the response for the live
>> +update command in the pending write data.
> 
> s/write/written for consistency I think.

I'll use "... in the pending not yet written data".


Juergen

RE: [PATCH v2] docs: update xenstore-migration.md
Posted by Paul Durrant 3 years, 11 months ago
> -----Original Message-----
> From: Jürgen Groß <jgross@suse.com>
> Sent: 28 May 2020 09:59
> To: paul@xen.org; xen-devel@lists.xenproject.org
> Cc: 'Stefano Stabellini' <sstabellini@kernel.org>; 'Julien Grall' <julien@xen.org>; 'Wei Liu'
> <wl@xen.org>; 'Andrew Cooper' <andrew.cooper3@citrix.com>; 'Ian Jackson' <ian.jackson@eu.citrix.com>;
> 'George Dunlap' <george.dunlap@citrix.com>; 'Jan Beulich' <jbeulich@suse.com>
> Subject: Re: [PATCH v2] docs: update xenstore-migration.md
> 
> On 28.05.20 10:53, Paul Durrant wrote:
> >> -----Original Message-----
> >> From: Xen-devel <xen-devel-bounces@lists.xenproject.org> On Behalf Of Juergen Gross
> >> Sent: 28 May 2020 09:22
> >> To: xen-devel@lists.xenproject.org
> >> Cc: Juergen Gross <jgross@suse.com>; Stefano Stabellini <sstabellini@kernel.org>; Julien Grall
> >> <julien@xen.org>; Wei Liu <wl@xen.org>; Andrew Cooper <andrew.cooper3@citrix.com>; Ian Jackson
> >> <ian.jackson@eu.citrix.com>; George Dunlap <george.dunlap@citrix.com>; Jan Beulich
> <jbeulich@suse.com>
> >> Subject: [PATCH v2] docs: update xenstore-migration.md
> >>
> >> Update connection record details: make flags common for sockets and
> >> domains, and add pending incoming data.
> >>
> >> Signed-off-by: Juergen Gross <jgross@suse.com>
> >> ---
> >> V2:
> >> - added out-resp-len to connection record
> >> ---
> >>   docs/designs/xenstore-migration.md | 71 +++++++++++++++++-------------
> >>   1 file changed, 40 insertions(+), 31 deletions(-)
> >>
> >> diff --git a/docs/designs/xenstore-migration.md b/docs/designs/xenstore-migration.md
> >> index 34a2afd17e..5736bbad94 100644
> >> --- a/docs/designs/xenstore-migration.md
> >> +++ b/docs/designs/xenstore-migration.md
> >> @@ -147,43 +147,59 @@ the domain being migrated.
> >>   ```
> >>       0       1       2       3       4       5       6       7    octet
> >>   +-------+-------+-------+-------+-------+-------+-------+-------+
> >> -| conn-id                       | conn-type     | conn-spec
> >> +| conn-id                       | conn-type     | flags         |
> >> ++-------------------------------+---------------+---------------+
> >> +| conn-spec
> >>   ...
> >> -+-------------------------------+-------------------------------+
> >> -| data-len                      | data
> >> -+-------------------------------+
> >> ++---------------+---------------+-------------------------------+
> >> +| in-data-len   | out-resp-len  | out-data-len                  |
> >> ++---------------+---------------+-------------------------------+
> >> +| data
> >>   ...
> >>   ```
> >>
> >>
> >> -| Field       | Description                                     |
> >> -|-------------|-------------------------------------------------|
> >> -| `conn-id`   | A non-zero number used to identify this         |
> >> -|             | connection in subsequent connection-specific    |
> >> -|             | records                                         |
> >> -|             |                                                 |
> >> -| `conn-type` | 0x0000: shared ring                             |
> >> -|             | 0x0001: socket                                  |
> >> -|             | 0x0002 - 0xFFFF: reserved for future use        |
> >> -|             |                                                 |
> >> -| `conn-spec` | See below                                       |
> >> -|             |                                                 |
> >> -| `data-len`  | The length (in octets) of any pending data not  |
> >> -|             | yet written to the connection                   |
> >> -|             |                                                 |
> >> -| `data`      | Pending data (may be empty)                     |
> >> +| Field          | Description                                  |
> >> +|----------------|----------------------------------------------|
> >> +| `conn-id`      | A non-zero number used to identify this      |
> >> +|                | connection in subsequent connection-specific |
> >> +|                | records                                      |
> >> +|                |                                              |
> >> +| `flags`        | A bit-wise OR of:                            |
> >> +|                | 0001: read-only                              |
> >> +|                |                                              |
> >> +| `conn-type`    | 0x0000: shared ring                          |
> >> +|                | 0x0001: socket                               |
> >> +|                | 0x0002 - 0xFFFF: reserved for future use     |
> >> +|                |                                              |
> >
> > Agreed with Julien... the above two would be better swapped to match the order of the fields in the
> record.
> 
> Yes.
> 
> >
> >> +| `conn-spec`    | See below                                    |
> >> +|                |                                              |
> >> +| `in-data-len`  | The length (in octets) of any data read      |
> >> +|                | from the connection not yet processed        |
> >> +|                |                                              |
> >> +| `out-resp-len` | The length (in octets) of a partial response |
> >> +|                | not yet written to the connection (included  |
> >> +|                | in the following `out-data-len`)             |
> >> +|                |                                              |
> >> +| `out-data-len` | The length (in octets) of any pending data   |
> >> +|                | not yet written to the connection            |
> >
> > So, IIUC out-data-len is inclusive of out-resp-len?
> 
> Yes.
> 
> >
> >> +|                |                                              |
> >> +| `data`         | Pending data, first read data, then written  |
> >> +|                | data (any of both may be empty)              |
> >
> > Perhaps be more explicit here:
> >
> > "Pending data: first in-data-len octets of read data, then out-data-len octets of written data"
> 
> Okay.
> 
> >
> >>
> >> -The format of `conn-spec` is dependent upon `conn-type`.
> >> +In case of live update the connection record for the connection via which
> >> +the live update command was issued will contain the response for the live
> >> +update command in the pending write data.
> >
> > s/write/written for consistency I think.
> 
> I'll use "... in the pending not yet written data".
> 

Ok.

  Paul

> 
> Juergen