From nobody Sat Nov 30 04:46:38 2024 Received: from relay1-d.mail.gandi.net (relay1-d.mail.gandi.net [217.70.183.193]) (using TLSv1.2 with cipher ECDHE-RSA-AES256-GCM-SHA384 (256/256 bits)) (No client certificate requested) by smtp.subspace.kernel.org (Postfix) with ESMTPS id 4DF7E136338; Thu, 12 Sep 2024 09:06:24 +0000 (UTC) Authentication-Results: smtp.subspace.kernel.org; arc=none smtp.client-ip=217.70.183.193 ARC-Seal: i=1; a=rsa-sha256; d=subspace.kernel.org; s=arc-20240116; t=1726131987; cv=none; b=mY+RRJ63mN1NufB5oNnHLKns8Wqg00+zr+C4O58SmpMmmwrivWImGeuIbpmv9xb2972ndx0R31FLCKoPrFoKSeyLHB/Ypu5guvRritppdtAtT1JWj+u3aH+Aww5uRBHImgXGaZ8wxTR7w6L1azoru7xgM6TA1sttT8nXZuUJkKU= ARC-Message-Signature: i=1; a=rsa-sha256; d=subspace.kernel.org; s=arc-20240116; t=1726131987; c=relaxed/simple; bh=gmWaGnaYgvGtbS+/WmvQDW233G9+1neW7bCLMHLlyQY=; h=From:To:Cc:Subject:Date:Message-Id:MIME-Version; b=LdeD6P6/MYfddpNzqsbek6/O9bMUZWCmxsqhDNXA8UXrR6X4vnaRau2eoFKq8OHPQKe1NR8+KgrRPVwpInm0BkBf1YZvaJxRb7iE1q5sASkQ1KpaMBfyKUu3bRhtxWixNZJAdZ10AxR4unExjuAu0ZrVVM08P1YSq8eAxzJVfEI= ARC-Authentication-Results: i=1; smtp.subspace.kernel.org; dmarc=pass (p=reject dis=none) header.from=bootlin.com; spf=pass smtp.mailfrom=bootlin.com; dkim=pass (2048-bit key) header.d=bootlin.com header.i=@bootlin.com header.b=hJcTxavP; arc=none smtp.client-ip=217.70.183.193 Authentication-Results: smtp.subspace.kernel.org; dmarc=pass (p=reject dis=none) header.from=bootlin.com Authentication-Results: smtp.subspace.kernel.org; spf=pass smtp.mailfrom=bootlin.com Authentication-Results: smtp.subspace.kernel.org; dkim=pass (2048-bit key) header.d=bootlin.com header.i=@bootlin.com header.b="hJcTxavP" Received: by mail.gandi.net (Postfix) with ESMTPSA id 830EB24000A; Thu, 12 Sep 2024 09:06:21 +0000 (UTC) DKIM-Signature: v=1; a=rsa-sha256; c=relaxed/relaxed; d=bootlin.com; s=gm1; t=1726131982; h=from:from:reply-to:subject:subject:date:date:message-id:message-id: to:to:cc:cc:mime-version:mime-version: content-transfer-encoding:content-transfer-encoding; bh=IF+Eaipz1NUyYQfRLpw/7X4WaLCiU+z8IzAnLdbUwUQ=; b=hJcTxavPDHghkve0RstAdi2ef2NNqHjw2MxQEDkpMRuz3G0m4iEF05cjhuexy1lfJDZeyS LxQNYsljFGd/OVcU+lOxw34N1WiuqYHnpc8ZTk58AoILmF7vjf4MOEQDoEnTwe1CWRmT03 8fNywin7C88k2rVdGM7ccykm84fILrS3J7k4z9rVg00ytxHmSjWJiQ7EQFmBl00enOMhh1 Kv44vOqy4XAhVJRmh/1O+rFiDHqCgD7Krc2nlRKjrlpfYq/GdE2uRAaVuu5TYZsTDylSCM iSAqlhRivio+zaeRT2u3C1ZaWHNicnGmDCx39LQvupZchWcSeon5fPgx9dmI0Q== From: Kory Maincent To: netdev@vger.kernel.org, linux-doc@vger.kernel.org, linux-kernel@vger.kernel.org Cc: Jakub Kicinski , Oleksij Rempel , Simon Horman , Kory Maincent , thomas.petazzoni@bootlin.com, "David S. Miller" , Eric Dumazet , Paolo Abeni , Jonathan Corbet Subject: [PATCH net-next v2] Documentation: networking: Fix missing PSE documentation and grammar issues Date: Thu, 12 Sep 2024 11:05:50 +0200 Message-Id: <20240912090550.743174-1-kory.maincent@bootlin.com> X-Mailer: git-send-email 2.34.1 Precedence: bulk X-Mailing-List: linux-kernel@vger.kernel.org List-Id: List-Subscribe: List-Unsubscribe: MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Transfer-Encoding: quoted-printable X-GND-Sasl: kory.maincent@bootlin.com Content-Type: text/plain; charset="utf-8" Fix a missing end of phrase in the documentation. It describes the ETHTOOL_A_C33_PSE_ACTUAL_PW attribute, which was not fully explained. Also, fix grammar issues by using simple present tense instead of present continuous. Reviewed-by: Oleksij Rempel Signed-off-by: Kory Maincent Reviewed-by: Simon Horman --- Change in v2: - Add grammar issue fixes. --- Documentation/networking/ethtool-netlink.rst | 15 ++++++++------- 1 file changed, 8 insertions(+), 7 deletions(-) diff --git a/Documentation/networking/ethtool-netlink.rst b/Documentation/n= etworking/ethtool-netlink.rst index ba90457b8b2d..295563e91082 100644 --- a/Documentation/networking/ethtool-netlink.rst +++ b/Documentation/networking/ethtool-netlink.rst @@ -1768,7 +1768,7 @@ Kernel response contents: When set, the optional ``ETHTOOL_A_PODL_PSE_ADMIN_STATE`` attribute identi= fies the operational state of the PoDL PSE functions. The operational state of= the PSE function can be changed using the ``ETHTOOL_A_PODL_PSE_ADMIN_CONTROL`` -action. This option is corresponding to ``IEEE 802.3-2018`` 30.15.1.1.2 +action. This attribute corresponds to ``IEEE 802.3-2018`` 30.15.1.1.2 aPoDLPSEAdminState. Possible values are: =20 .. kernel-doc:: include/uapi/linux/ethtool.h @@ -1782,8 +1782,8 @@ The same goes for ``ETHTOOL_A_C33_PSE_ADMIN_STATE`` i= mplementing =20 When set, the optional ``ETHTOOL_A_PODL_PSE_PW_D_STATUS`` attribute identi= fies the power detection status of the PoDL PSE. The status depend on internal= PSE -state machine and automatic PD classification support. This option is -corresponding to ``IEEE 802.3-2018`` 30.15.1.1.3 aPoDLPSEPowerDetectionSta= tus. +state machine and automatic PD classification support. This attribute +corresponds to ``IEEE 802.3-2018`` 30.15.1.1.3 aPoDLPSEPowerDetectionStatu= s. Possible values are: =20 .. kernel-doc:: include/uapi/linux/ethtool.h @@ -1797,12 +1797,13 @@ The same goes for ``ETHTOOL_A_C33_PSE_ADMIN_PW_D_ST= ATUS`` implementing =20 When set, the optional ``ETHTOOL_A_C33_PSE_PW_CLASS`` attribute identifies the power class of the C33 PSE. It depends on the class negotiated between -the PSE and the PD. This option is corresponding to ``IEEE 802.3-2022`` +the PSE and the PD. This attribute corresponds to ``IEEE 802.3-2022`` 30.9.1.1.8 aPSEPowerClassification. =20 When set, the optional ``ETHTOOL_A_C33_PSE_ACTUAL_PW`` attribute identifies -This option is corresponding to ``IEEE 802.3-2022`` 30.9.1.1.23 aPSEActual= Power. -Actual power is reported in mW. +the actual power drawn by the C33 PSE. This attribute corresponds to +``IEEE 802.3-2022`` 30.9.1.1.23 aPSEActualPower. Actual power is reported +in mW. =20 When set, the optional ``ETHTOOL_A_C33_PSE_EXT_STATE`` attribute identifies the extended error state of the C33 PSE. Possible values are: @@ -1851,7 +1852,7 @@ Request contents: =3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D= =3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D =3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D =3D=3D=3D= =3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D= =3D =20 When set, the optional ``ETHTOOL_A_PODL_PSE_ADMIN_CONTROL`` attribute is u= sed -to control PoDL PSE Admin functions. This option is implementing +to control PoDL PSE Admin functions. This option implements ``IEEE 802.3-2018`` 30.15.1.2.1 acPoDLPSEAdminControl. See ``ETHTOOL_A_PODL_PSE_ADMIN_STATE`` for supported values. =20 --=20 2.34.1