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Tsirkin" , Alex Williamson , Pavel Dovgalyuk , Victor Toso de Carvalho , =?UTF-8?q?C=C3=A9dric=20Le=20Goater?= , =?UTF-8?q?Daniel=20P=2E=20Berrang=C3=A9?= , qemu-block@nongnu.org, Ani Sinha , Fabiano Rosas , Marcel Apfelbaum , =?UTF-8?q?Marc-Andr=C3=A9=20Lureau?= , Gerd Hoffmann , Paolo Bonzini , Kevin Wolf , Peter Xu , Eduardo Habkost , Markus Armbruster , =?UTF-8?q?Philippe=20Mathieu-Daud=C3=A9?= , Lukas Straub , Igor Mammedov , Jason Wang , Yanan Wang , Hanna Reitz , Konstantin Kostiuk , Stefan Berger , John Snow Subject: [PATCH v2 11/21] qapi: update prose in note blocks Date: Wed, 26 Jun 2024 18:21:17 -0400 Message-ID: <20240626222128.406106-12-jsnow@redhat.com> In-Reply-To: <20240626222128.406106-1-jsnow@redhat.com> References: <20240626222128.406106-1-jsnow@redhat.com> MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Transfer-Encoding: quoted-printable X-Scanned-By: MIMEDefang 3.0 on 10.30.177.12 Received-SPF: pass (zohomail.com: domain of gnu.org designates 209.51.188.17 as permitted sender) client-ip=209.51.188.17; envelope-from=qemu-devel-bounces+importer=patchew.org@nongnu.org; helo=lists.gnu.org; Received-SPF: pass client-ip=170.10.133.124; envelope-from=jsnow@redhat.com; helo=us-smtp-delivery-124.mimecast.com X-Spam_score_int: -22 X-Spam_score: -2.3 X-Spam_bar: -- X-Spam_report: (-2.3 / 5.0 requ) BAYES_00=-1.9, DKIMWL_WL_HIGH=-0.207, DKIM_SIGNED=0.1, DKIM_VALID=-0.1, DKIM_VALID_AU=-0.1, DKIM_VALID_EF=-0.1, RCVD_IN_DNSWL_NONE=-0.0001, RCVD_IN_MSPIKE_H4=0.001, RCVD_IN_MSPIKE_WL=0.001, SPF_HELO_NONE=0.001, SPF_PASS=-0.001 autolearn=ham autolearn_force=no X-Spam_action: no action X-BeenThere: qemu-devel@nongnu.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.29 Precedence: list List-Id: List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , Errors-To: qemu-devel-bounces+importer=patchew.org@nongnu.org Sender: qemu-devel-bounces+importer=patchew.org@nongnu.org X-ZohoMail-DKIM: pass (identity @redhat.com) X-ZM-MESSAGEID: 1719440637168100001 Content-Type: text/plain; charset="utf-8" Where I've noticed, rephrase the note to read more fluently. Signed-off-by: John Snow Reviewed-by: Markus Armbruster --- qapi/block-core.json | 4 ++-- qga/qapi-schema.json | 2 +- 2 files changed, 3 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-) diff --git a/qapi/block-core.json b/qapi/block-core.json index cacedfb771c..9ef23ec02ae 100644 --- a/qapi/block-core.json +++ b/qapi/block-core.json @@ -6048,9 +6048,9 @@ # # @name: the name of the internal snapshot to be created # -# .. note:: In transaction, if @name is empty, or any snapshot matching +# .. note:: In a transaction, if @name is empty or any snapshot matching # @name exists, the operation will fail. Only some image formats -# support it, for example, qcow2, and rbd. +# support it; for example, qcow2, and rbd. # # Since: 1.7 ## diff --git a/qga/qapi-schema.json b/qga/qapi-schema.json index 57598331c5c..1273d85bb5f 100644 --- a/qga/qapi-schema.json +++ b/qga/qapi-schema.json @@ -480,7 +480,7 @@ # # Returns: Number of file systems thawed by this call # -# .. note:: If return value does not match the previous call to +# .. note:: If the return value does not match the previous call to # guest-fsfreeze-freeze, this likely means some freezable filesystems # were unfrozen before this call, and that the filesystem state may # have changed before issuing this command. --=20 2.45.0