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When looking at the MPTCP PM Netlink specs rendered version [1], a few
small issues have been found with the descriptions, and fixed here:

- Patch 1: add a missing attribute for two events. For >= v5.19.

- Patch 2: clearly mention the attributes. For >= v6.7.

- Patch 3: fix missing descriptions and replace a wrong one. For >= v6.7.

Link: https://docs.kernel.org/networking/netlink_spec/mptcp_pm.html [1]
Signed-off-by: Matthieu Baerts (NGI0) <matttbe@kernel.org>
---
Please note that there is no urgency here: this can of course be sent to
Linus next year!

Enjoy this holiday period!

---
Matthieu Baerts (NGI0) (3):
      netlink: specs: mptcp: add missing 'server-side' attr
      netlink: specs: mptcp: clearly mention attributes
      netlink: specs: mptcp: fix missing doc

Documentation/netlink/specs/mptcp_pm.yaml | 60 ++++++++++++++++---------------
 1 file changed, 31 insertions(+), 29 deletions(-)
---
base-commit: ce1219c3f76bb131d095e90521506d3c6ccfa086
change-id: 20241219-net-mptcp-netlink-specs-pm-doc-fixes-618a2e8f6aeb

Best regards,
-- 
Matthieu Baerts (NGI0) <matttbe@kernel.org>

This attribute is added with the 'created' and 'established' events, but
the documentation didn't mention it.

Fixes: 41b3c69bf941 ("mptcp: expose server_side attribute in MPTCP netlink events")
Cc: stable@vger.kernel.org
Reviewed-by: Geliang Tang <geliang@kernel.org>
Signed-off-by: Matthieu Baerts (NGI0) <matttbe@kernel.org>
---
 Documentation/netlink/specs/mptcp_pm.yaml | 6 ++++--
 1 file changed, 4 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-)

-- 
2.47.1

The rendered version of the MPTCP events [1] looked strange, because the
whole content of the 'doc' was displayed in the same block.

It was then not clear that the first words, not even ended by a period,
were the attributes that are defined when such events are emitted. These
attributes have now been moved to the end, prefixed by 'Attributes:' and
ended with a period. Note that '>-' has been added after 'doc:' to allow
':' in the text below.

Fixes: bc8aeb2045e2 ("Documentation: netlink: add a YAML spec for mptcp")
Cc: stable@vger.kernel.org
Link: https://docs.kernel.org/networking/netlink_spec/mptcp_pm.html#event-type [1]
Reviewed-by: Geliang Tang <geliang@kernel.org>
Signed-off-by: Matthieu Baerts (NGI0) <matttbe@kernel.org>
---
 Documentation/netlink/specs/mptcp_pm.yaml | 50 +++++++++++++++----------------
 1 file changed, 25 insertions(+), 25 deletions(-)

-- 
2.47.1

Two operations didn't have a small description. It looks like something
that has been missed in the original commit introducing this file.

Replace the two "todo" by a small and simple description: Create/Destroy
subflow.

While at it, also uniform the capital letters, avoid double spaces, and
fix the "announce" event description: a new "address" has been
announced, not a new "subflow".

Fixes: bc8aeb2045e2 ("Documentation: netlink: add a YAML spec for mptcp")
Cc: stable@vger.kernel.org
Reviewed-by: Geliang Tang <geliang@kernel.org>
Signed-off-by: Matthieu Baerts (NGI0) <matttbe@kernel.org>
---
 Documentation/netlink/specs/mptcp_pm.yaml | 12 ++++++------
 1 file changed, 6 insertions(+), 6 deletions(-)

-- 
2.47.1

When looking at the MPTCP PM Netlink specs rendered version [1], a few
small issues have been found with the descriptions, and fixed here:

- Patch 1: add a missing attribute for two events. For >= v5.19.

- Patch 2: clearly mention the attributes. For >= v6.7.

- Patch 3: fix missing descriptions and replace a wrong one. For >= v6.7.

Enjoy this holiday period!

---
Changes in v2:
- Run ynl-regen.sh and removed Fixes tag. (Jakub)
- Link to v1: https://lore.kernel.org/r/20241219-net-mptcp-netlink-specs-pm-doc-fixes-v1-0-825d3b45f27b@kernel.org

---
Matthieu Baerts (NGI0) (3):
      netlink: specs: mptcp: add missing 'server-side' attr
      netlink: specs: mptcp: clearly mention attributes
      netlink: specs: mptcp: fix missing doc

Documentation/netlink/specs/mptcp_pm.yaml | 60 ++++++++++++++++---------------
 include/uapi/linux/mptcp_pm.h             | 50 +++++++++++++-------------
 2 files changed, 57 insertions(+), 53 deletions(-)
---
base-commit: 30b981796b94b083da8fdded7cb74cb493608760
change-id: 20241219-net-mptcp-netlink-specs-pm-doc-fixes-618a2e8f6aeb

Best regards,
-- 
Matthieu Baerts (NGI0) <matttbe@kernel.org>

This attribute is added with the 'created' and 'established' events, but
the documentation didn't mention it.

The documentation in the UAPI header has been auto-generated by:

./tools/net/ynl/ynl-regen.sh

Reviewed-by: Geliang Tang <geliang@kernel.org>
Signed-off-by: Matthieu Baerts (NGI0) <matttbe@kernel.org>
---
Notes:
  - v2: Regen YNL doc + remove Fixes tag (Jakub).
---
 Documentation/netlink/specs/mptcp_pm.yaml |  6 ++++--
 include/uapi/linux/mptcp_pm.h             | 11 ++++++-----
 2 files changed, 10 insertions(+), 7 deletions(-)

-- 
2.47.1

The rendered version of the MPTCP events [1] looked strange, because the
whole content of the 'doc' was displayed in the same block.

The documentation in the UAPI header has been auto-generated by:

./tools/net/ynl/ynl-regen.sh

Link: https://docs.kernel.org/networking/netlink_spec/mptcp_pm.html#event-type [1]
Reviewed-by: Geliang Tang <geliang@kernel.org>
Signed-off-by: Matthieu Baerts (NGI0) <matttbe@kernel.org>
---
Notes:
  - v2: Regen YNL doc + remove Fixes tag (Jakub).
---
 Documentation/netlink/specs/mptcp_pm.yaml | 50 ++++++++++++++---------------
 include/uapi/linux/mptcp_pm.h             | 53 ++++++++++++++++---------------
 2 files changed, 52 insertions(+), 51 deletions(-)

diff --git a/Documentation/netlink/specs/mptcp_pm.yaml b/Documentation/netlink/specs/mptcp_pm.yaml
index XXXXXXX..XXXXXXX 100644
--- a/Documentation/netlink/specs/mptcp_pm.yaml
+++ b/Documentation/netlink/specs/mptcp_pm.yaml
@@ -XXX,XX +XXX,XX @@ definitions:
       doc: unused event
      -
       name: created
-      doc:
-        token, family, saddr4 | saddr6, daddr4 | daddr6, sport, dport,
-        server-side
+      doc: >-
         A new MPTCP connection has been created. It is the good time to
         allocate memory and send ADD_ADDR if needed. Depending on the
         traffic-patterns it can take a long time until the
         MPTCP_EVENT_ESTABLISHED is sent.
+        Attributes: token, family, saddr4 | saddr6, daddr4 | daddr6, sport,
+        dport, server-side.
      -
       name: established
-      doc:
-        token, family, saddr4 | saddr6, daddr4 | daddr6, sport, dport,
-        server-side
+      doc: >-
         A MPTCP connection is established (can start new subflows).
+        Attributes: token, family, saddr4 | saddr6, daddr4 | daddr6, sport,
+        dport, server-side.
      -
       name: closed
-      doc:
-        token
+      doc: >-
         A MPTCP connection has stopped.
+        Attribute: token.
      -
       name: announced
       value: 6
-      doc:
-        token, rem_id, family, daddr4 | daddr6 [, dport]
+      doc: >-
         A new address has been announced by the peer.
+        Attributes: token, rem_id, family, daddr4 | daddr6 [, dport].
      -
       name: removed
-      doc:
-        token, rem_id
+      doc: >-
         An address has been lost by the peer.
+        Attributes: token, rem_id.
      -
       name: sub-established
       value: 10
-      doc:
-        token, family, loc_id, rem_id, saddr4 | saddr6, daddr4 | daddr6, sport,
-        dport, backup, if_idx [, error]
+      doc: >-
         A new subflow has been established. 'error' should not be set.
+        Attributes: token, family, loc_id, rem_id, saddr4 | saddr6, daddr4 |
+        daddr6, sport, dport, backup, if_idx [, error].
      -
       name: sub-closed
-      doc:
-        token, family, loc_id, rem_id, saddr4 | saddr6, daddr4 | daddr6, sport,
-        dport, backup, if_idx [, error]
+      doc: >-
         A subflow has been closed. An error (copy of sk_err) could be set if an
         error has been detected for this subflow.
+        Attributes: token, family, loc_id, rem_id, saddr4 | saddr6, daddr4 |
+        daddr6, sport, dport, backup, if_idx [, error].
      -
       name: sub-priority
       value: 13
-      doc:
-        token, family, loc_id, rem_id, saddr4 | saddr6, daddr4 | daddr6, sport,
-        dport, backup, if_idx [, error]
+      doc: >-
         The priority of a subflow has changed. 'error' should not be set.
+        Attributes: token, family, loc_id, rem_id, saddr4 | saddr6, daddr4 |
+        daddr6, sport, dport, backup, if_idx [, error].
      -
       name: listener-created
       value: 15
-      doc:
-        family, sport, saddr4 | saddr6
+      doc: >-
         A new PM listener is created.
+        Attributes: family, sport, saddr4 | saddr6.
      -
       name: listener-closed
-      doc:
-        family, sport, saddr4 | saddr6
+      doc: >-
         A PM listener is closed.
+        Attributes: family, sport, saddr4 | saddr6.
 
 attribute-sets:
   -
diff --git a/include/uapi/linux/mptcp_pm.h b/include/uapi/linux/mptcp_pm.h
index XXXXXXX..XXXXXXX 100644
--- a/include/uapi/linux/mptcp_pm.h
+++ b/include/uapi/linux/mptcp_pm.h
@@ -XXX,XX +XXX,XX @@
 /**
  * enum mptcp_event_type
  * @MPTCP_EVENT_UNSPEC: unused event
- * @MPTCP_EVENT_CREATED: token, family, saddr4 | saddr6, daddr4 | daddr6,
- *   sport, dport, server-side A new MPTCP connection has been created. It is
- *   the good time to allocate memory and send ADD_ADDR if needed. Depending on
- *   the traffic-patterns it can take a long time until the
- *   MPTCP_EVENT_ESTABLISHED is sent.
- * @MPTCP_EVENT_ESTABLISHED: token, family, saddr4 | saddr6, daddr4 | daddr6,
- *   sport, dport, server-side A MPTCP connection is established (can start new
- *   subflows).
- * @MPTCP_EVENT_CLOSED: token A MPTCP connection has stopped.
- * @MPTCP_EVENT_ANNOUNCED: token, rem_id, family, daddr4 | daddr6 [, dport] A
- *   new address has been announced by the peer.
- * @MPTCP_EVENT_REMOVED: token, rem_id An address has been lost by the peer.
- * @MPTCP_EVENT_SUB_ESTABLISHED: token, family, loc_id, rem_id, saddr4 |
- *   saddr6, daddr4 | daddr6, sport, dport, backup, if_idx [, error] A new
- *   subflow has been established. 'error' should not be set.
- * @MPTCP_EVENT_SUB_CLOSED: token, family, loc_id, rem_id, saddr4 | saddr6,
- *   daddr4 | daddr6, sport, dport, backup, if_idx [, error] A subflow has been
- *   closed. An error (copy of sk_err) could be set if an error has been
- *   detected for this subflow.
- * @MPTCP_EVENT_SUB_PRIORITY: token, family, loc_id, rem_id, saddr4 | saddr6,
- *   daddr4 | daddr6, sport, dport, backup, if_idx [, error] The priority of a
- *   subflow has changed. 'error' should not be set.
- * @MPTCP_EVENT_LISTENER_CREATED: family, sport, saddr4 | saddr6 A new PM
- *   listener is created.
- * @MPTCP_EVENT_LISTENER_CLOSED: family, sport, saddr4 | saddr6 A PM listener
- *   is closed.
+ * @MPTCP_EVENT_CREATED: A new MPTCP connection has been created. It is the
+ *   good time to allocate memory and send ADD_ADDR if needed. Depending on the
+ *   traffic-patterns it can take a long time until the MPTCP_EVENT_ESTABLISHED
+ *   is sent. Attributes: token, family, saddr4 | saddr6, daddr4 | daddr6,
+ *   sport, dport, server-side.
+ * @MPTCP_EVENT_ESTABLISHED: A MPTCP connection is established (can start new
+ *   subflows). Attributes: token, family, saddr4 | saddr6, daddr4 | daddr6,
+ *   sport, dport, server-side.
+ * @MPTCP_EVENT_CLOSED: A MPTCP connection has stopped. Attribute: token.
+ * @MPTCP_EVENT_ANNOUNCED: A new address has been announced by the peer.
+ *   Attributes: token, rem_id, family, daddr4 | daddr6 [, dport].
+ * @MPTCP_EVENT_REMOVED: An address has been lost by the peer. Attributes:
+ *   token, rem_id.
+ * @MPTCP_EVENT_SUB_ESTABLISHED: A new subflow has been established. 'error'
+ *   should not be set. Attributes: token, family, loc_id, rem_id, saddr4 |
+ *   saddr6, daddr4 | daddr6, sport, dport, backup, if_idx [, error].
+ * @MPTCP_EVENT_SUB_CLOSED: A subflow has been closed. An error (copy of
+ *   sk_err) could be set if an error has been detected for this subflow.
+ *   Attributes: token, family, loc_id, rem_id, saddr4 | saddr6, daddr4 |
+ *   daddr6, sport, dport, backup, if_idx [, error].
+ * @MPTCP_EVENT_SUB_PRIORITY: The priority of a subflow has changed. 'error'
+ *   should not be set. Attributes: token, family, loc_id, rem_id, saddr4 |
+ *   saddr6, daddr4 | daddr6, sport, dport, backup, if_idx [, error].
+ * @MPTCP_EVENT_LISTENER_CREATED: A new PM listener is created. Attributes:
+ *   family, sport, saddr4 | saddr6.
+ * @MPTCP_EVENT_LISTENER_CLOSED: A PM listener is closed. Attributes: family,
+ *   sport, saddr4 | saddr6.
  */
 enum mptcp_event_type {
 	MPTCP_EVENT_UNSPEC,

-- 
2.47.1

Two operations didn't have a small description. It looks like something
that has been missed in the original commit introducing this file.

Replace the two "todo" by a small and simple description: Create/Destroy
subflow.

While at it, also uniform the capital letters, avoid double spaces, and
fix the "announce" event description: a new "address" has been
announced, not a new "subflow".

Reviewed-by: Geliang Tang <geliang@kernel.org>
Signed-off-by: Matthieu Baerts (NGI0) <matttbe@kernel.org>
---
Notes:
  - v2: Removed Fixes tag (Jakub).
---
 Documentation/netlink/specs/mptcp_pm.yaml | 12 ++++++------
 1 file changed, 6 insertions(+), 6 deletions(-)

-- 
2.47.1